[Cryptech Core] draft template document

[Leif Johansson]

On 2014-06-16 19:12, Paul Selkirk wrote:
> The thing that jumps out at me is the interchange between "Supplier"
> and "Service Provider" (or once just "Provider"). Since these terms
> appear to apply to the same party, the contract should use the same term
> consistently. This affects sections 2.1 and 3.
> 

That seems like an oversight.

> Nitpicks:
> - In section 6, top of page 5, "Both Parties agrees" should be "Each
> Party agrees".

Yep.

> - In section 8.4, subsections 1.1.2 and 1.1.2 should be 8.4.1 and 8.4.2.
> (Might possibly be a rendering problem in LibreOffice; I no longer have
> a copy of MS-Word to compare with.)
> 

I've run into similar rendering problems myself using LO.